So glad that Carol is hosting today. Head over to Carol’s Corner for some great poetry.
Some students shared their fall haiku. I asked permission to share and they said yes. I am posting as they wrote them. I love the hyphens in Emma’s.
Crack-ling camp-fire smokes
Glor-i-ous leaves fall in fires
Jump though gol-den leaves
© Emma M.
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Blowing cold
Falling yellow red green leaves
Golden paths, paths of leaves
© Tawnos J.
Hopefully, I will have permission to share more next week.
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Nice work from those two. I agree. I love the hyphens. A budding Emily Dickinson.
These are beautiful! I look forward to more next week!
Both so gorgeous. thanks for sharing and I look forward to more next week.
Great work! Thank you for sharing. I love haiku and I love poems about fall. Looking forward to more poetry.
Very fun! These seem like they might be from students who have lived under your poetry influence for a few years.
I can hear the sounds emerging from these poems, and I like the hyphens too, thanks for sharing them Jone!
These are lovely fall haiku. The first one reminds me of my chickens–they love jumping in a pile of leaves.